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Band 7+: are there more beautiful things now than in the past

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Well, that's a difficult question because beauty is a subjective concept and varies from one person to another. It really depends on their personality and characteristics. If they value details, then the answer would be the past. In the past, people used many details and vibrant colors, blending them to create things. However, if the person prefers minimalism, then the present is much more preferable for them, as architecture and fashion are much simpler nowadays. For example, people build simple high-rise buildings made of glass instead of shaping details with chalk or sewing.

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Well, that’s a difficult question because beauty is a subjective concept and varies from one person to another one. It really depends on their personality and characteristics. If they value details, then the answer would be PASH. In the past, people used much details and vibrant colors and a blend of them in order to build things. However, if the person prefers minimalism, then present is much more preferable for them as architecture and fashion are much simpler nowadays. For example, people build simple high-rise buildings made of glass instead of shaping details with chalk or sewn.

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Task Response

The response addresses the question directly and provides a balanced perspective by considering different preferences related to beauty. The answer could be strengthened by providing a wider range of examples and exploring the concept of beauty in more diverse contexts.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is generally coherent and well-organized, presenting a clear argument with contrasting viewpoints. However, there are a few instances where the flow could be smoother. For example, the transition to the example could be more integrated. To improve, focus on using more varied cohesive devices and ensuring each sentence flows logically from the previous one.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and appropriate for the topic, with some good use of words like 'subjective,' 'minimalism,' and 'vibrant.' However, there's room for more sophisticated vocabulary to elevate the response. For instance, instead of 'build things,' consider using more specific terms like 'construct edifices' or 'craft artifacts.' Also, the phrase 'PASH' seems to be a misspoken word. Ensure clarity in pronunciation to avoid confusion.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate, with a good range of structures used. There are a few minor errors, such as 'people used much details' (should be 'many details') and 'shaping details with chalk or sewn' (should be 'sewing'). Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and correct preposition usage. Reviewing common grammatical errors and practicing sentence construction can further improve accuracy.

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