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Band 5+: The first graph below shows the weight (in tonnes) of fruit produced by a farm during each month in 2013, and also the amount (in tonnes) of fertiliser used. The second graph shows the volume of rainfall in each month (in millimetres). Write a report summarising the information. Select and describe the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains two graphs; the top graph shows two lines representing the "Weight of fruit produced (tonnes) in 2013" and "Amount of fertiliser used (tonnes) in 2013" over 12 months; fruit weight starts at 4 tonnes in Jan, peaks at 4.5 in Apr, declines to 0.5 in Dec; fertiliser use starts at 0.5 tonnes in Jan, peaks at 1 in May, declines to 0.5 in Dec. The bottom graph is a bar chart representing "Rainfall in millimetres (mm) in 2013” over 12 months; rainfall ranges from 4 mm in Nov to 16 mm in Jun, with variations in between (14 mm in Feb, 12 mm in Mar and Apr, 10 mm in Jul, 6 mm in Dec).

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The line graph below will illustrate the weight of the fruits being produced by a farm and the amount of fertiliser used in 2013 . Whereas the bar chart will give data about the volume of the rainfall over the period .

Over all ,Its clear that the weight of fruits had sharbly increased over the period . In contarst , the amount of fertiliser used had fallen over the months in 2013 . You can see the amount of rainfall in the bar chart remined unstable over the year .

In the line graph , there was an increase in the amount of fertiliser in the first months , but suddenly it recorded a decline to october . Its obvious that in May , June and July the amount of fertiliser remain unchanged . There was a significantly increase in the weight of fruits being produced then it faced a decline after august.

In the bar chart ,the amount of Rainfall had rised from Jan to Feb then it faced a fall to Sep without any reasons . The scientists recorded a rise in the amount of rainfall from october to the end of the year .

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amount: 7

fertiliser: 4

rainfall: 4

weight: 3

fruits: 3

chart: 3

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Task Response

The report generally addresses the requirements of the task, but there are inaccuracies and omissions that detract from the overall achievement. The overview is not very informative, and the description of the data lacks specific details and accurate comparisons. To improve, focus on providing a more comprehensive overview that highlights key trends and relationships. Also, include more specific data points and make accurate comparisons to support your descriptions.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize information, but the overall structure feels somewhat disjointed. The overview is very general and doesn't provide a strong sense of the report's content. The subsequent paragraphs lack clear topic sentences, making it difficult to follow the main points. Transitions between sentences and ideas could be smoother to improve the flow of the report. For example, the shift from the line graph to the bar chart feels abrupt. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas and create a more unified and coherent text.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is relatively basic and lacks the precision needed to accurately describe the data. There is some repetition of words and phrases (e.g., 'amount of'). To improve, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to trends, quantities, and comparisons. For instance, instead of 'increase,' consider using words like 'growth,' 'rise,' or 'surge,' depending on the context. Also, focus on using more specific language to describe the data, such as 'the weight of fruits peaked' instead of 'there was a significantly increase in the weight of fruits.' Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. There are issues with verb tense consistency, subject-verb agreement, and article usage. Sentence structure is also quite simple, limiting the complexity of the ideas that can be expressed. To improve, focus on reviewing basic grammar rules and practicing sentence construction. Try to incorporate a wider range of sentence structures, including complex sentences, to add depth and sophistication to your writing. Pay close attention to punctuation, especially commas and periods, to ensure clarity.

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