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Band 6+: To what extent does globalization contribute to the erosion of cultural identity?

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I think globalization doesn't fully contribute to the erosion of cultural identity, and it's not something to be concerned about, but it's really about what people think. Nowadays, people are so habituated to socialization, social media, and technology that they are not very interested in culture. For example, when there is an art exhibition, only a small number of people attend. Nowadays, people prefer going to the cinema rather than attending stage dramas. It is a concern about what people think, not that globalization is fully to blame, because the erosion of cultural identity is not solely due to globalization.

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I think globalization don’t fully contribute to the erosion of social identity and it’s not about something to be concerned but it’s really concerned about what people think. Nowadays people are so much habituated with socialization, social media and technologies. they are not too much interested in culture. Like when there is an exhibition of art alone, a small amount of people go to the art exhibition also nowadays people love to go cinema hall rather than go to show our stage drama, it is a concern about what people think, not globalization is fully, not globalization is fully because of the origin of culture is fully because of the erosion of culture identity.

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erosion: 2

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