Part 3

Band 6+: Do you believe that art education is essential for all children, even those who don't plan to pursue artistic careers?

See all user-submitted answers on this topic

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Note: Both the topic and the answer were submitted by one of our users.

75% Accuracy The overall pronunciation accuracy of your speech, reflecting how well a native speaker can comprehend it.

Polished transcript:

Male Female

From my perspective, it's not essential for all school children. I would say it is important only for children who have the ability to learn art education or an interest in art, music, or drawing, and something like that. For that reason, I think every child should pay attention to and care about subjects that they want and are interested in, because it will be better than other essential subjects. I know that many people struggle with uninteresting subjects because they think the future of this subject could be better. I believe every person, every child, should use their own abilities.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

From my perspective, it’s not a chance for all school children. I would say it is important only for children who have ability to learn art education or interest about art, music, or draw, and something like that. So for that reason I think every children should pay attention and care about subjects which they want, which they interest, because it will be better than other essential subjects. Because I know that more people they struggled with uninteresting subjects because they think that the future of this object could be better. for the truth and I think every person every children should use their own ability.

Tips: Click on each word to see feedback.

Speaking Time: 40 seconds

Check Your Own Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample With Your Idea?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
Strive to incorporate even richer and more precise language.

Vocabulary Repetition:

that: 4

every: 3

subjects: 3

essential: 2

children: 2

think: 2

child: 2

should: 2

because: 2

better: 2

Try using synonyms for the above words

Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The response addresses the question and provides a clear opinion. However, the reasoning could be more developed and supported with specific examples or explanations. Consider expanding on the benefits of focusing on subjects of interest and the potential drawbacks of forcing all students to study art.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is somewhat coherent, but there are noticeable pauses and hesitations that affect the flow. The organization of ideas could be improved with clearer transitions between points. To enhance fluency, practice speaking on similar topics and focus on connecting your thoughts more smoothly. Using cohesive devices like 'furthermore,' 'however,' and 'in addition' can help improve coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and variety. The phrase 'something like that' is vague and overused. To improve, try to use more specific and descriptive words related to art and education. For example, instead of 'something like that,' you could say 'various forms of creative expression.' Expanding your vocabulary and practicing using new words in context will be beneficial.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The answer contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Examples include 'it's not a chance for all school children,' 'interest about art,' and 'more people they struggled.' To improve, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Practice writing and speaking with attention to accuracy, and seek feedback on your errors. Reviewing common grammatical errors and practicing corrections can also be helpful.

Answers On The Same Topic:

Do you believe that art education is essential for all children, even those who don’t plan to pursue artistic careers?

I see that art education is not essential for all children because not everyone can do arts for example my friend goes to art school and she she does she doesn’t paint good because she goes to the school like for three four years and I I think for 3-4 years it’s not pretty because […]

Band 6+

Do you believe that art education is essential for all children, even those who don’t plan to pursue artistic careers?

Of course I believe that art education is essential for all children because art is important in any subject. All the children are not good in heart but they need to practice This will learn how to art because every section needs art. In every subject, have art to draw. Art education is really important […]

Band 6+

See All

Is this different from the kind of achievement that made people famous in the past?In what ways?

Yes, I do believe so. In fact, this process has changed dramatically over the years. For instance, nowadays people are able to gain worldwide fame through social networking sites. They tend to publish their performances on social media platforms. As a result, it encourages them to capture the public’s attention. However, in the past, it […]

Band 7+

What advantages are there for students to experience teamwork at school?

I believe working with groups has students build a strong sense of community. It is a great way for them to join hands and show difficult problems together. Moreover, certain types of heavy work around might easily to handle. By being good team players, students also want to communicate better with their peers. Therefore, till […]

Band 7+

To what extent do you think that advertising influences people's purchasing decisions?

I agree with the topic to the extent that I think advertising influences people’s values and beliefs in a significant way. It impacts individuals’ belief and values in a significantly negative way that they reach to the pinnacle of their emotion and just can’t control it anymore. Whereas, they feel the need of the product […]

Band 7+

How do differing cultural values influence international business negotiations and collaborations?

Deferring cultural values can significantly influence international business negotiation and collaborations. This practice manifests in various type of ways such as negotiation strategies, communication styles and expectation from counterparty involved. Firstly, negotiation style where Individualistic cultured people lean on to distributive negotiations. On the other hand, collectivistic cultured people like to negotiate more integrative way. […]

Band 7+

What are the difference old people keep things between young keep things?

Honestly, I think old people often keep traditional items such as old photographs and something like historical medals that reflects their bravery and like energy dots they overcome a lot of difficulties in the past Contrastingly young people often keep things more modern like technological devices or close dots, stay updated and follow trends. However, […]

Band 7+

Why do some people choose to work in a local company?

Let me see. They will, most of people, if most people work in the countryside or the companies which they used to work, they used to live here, They feel relaxed. And then the local company gives a lot of chance to teach the employee. So that’s why the employee will be reassured. Furthermore, the […]

Band 6+

See All

Check Your Own Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample With Your Idea?

Overall Band Score

Pronunciation

Task Response

Fluency & Coherence

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium