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Band 4+: The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.

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The image shows a bar chart comparing the expenditure on consumer goods in pounds sterling between France and the UK in 2010. France's spending on cars, computers, books, perfume, and cameras was around £400,000, £350,000, £300,000, £400,000, and £350,000 respectively. The UK's expenditure on the same goods was approximately £450,000, £400,000, £150,000, £450,000, and £300,000 respectively.

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The bar graph provides us, with the expense of France and UK consume four items (cars, computers, perfume , cameras) in 2010.

Overall, it is clear that in UK had been consumed almost each goods a lot than France. There had been huge between two countries with cameras.

The amount of car users was slightly larger in UK than that of in France. Using of computers was 350,000 in France however in UK less people utilize it. The given illustration show a fourfold increase in the number of cameras in UK in comparison to France. Book readers were majority in UK and it was just below 300.000 populations. Among these items perfume used a little amount of shown countries

Just cars users were amount of people than other items however book stayed just under it second place. As can be seen from a bar cars and computers using roughly the same.

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computers: 3

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5.5

The response addresses the task for the most part, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions in the content. The comparison between France and the UK in terms of expenditure on consumer goods is mentioned, but some specific details are missing or unclear.

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There are some coherence and cohesion issues present in the report. The organization of ideas is somewhat confusing, and the flow of information could be improved. Additionally, there are some abrupt shifts between different points.

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The report demonstrates an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but there are inaccuracies and awkward phrasings throughout. More precise and varied word choices could enhance the lexical resource. Some sentences are unclear due to vocabulary issues.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While a variety of grammatical structures are attempted, there are several errors in sentence structure, verb tense, and agreement. Punctuation errors also affect the overall clarity of the report. More attention to grammar and sentence construction is needed.

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