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Band 6+: 🔥 PART-2 | TOPIC-77. PERSON YOU FOLLOW ON SOCIAL MEDIA (NOV 2024 - APR 2025) ⭐ Describe a person you follow on social media. You should say: 🔵 who this person is 🔵 how you know this person 🔵 what this person posts on social media 🔵 explain why you follow this person

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Well, I'm going to talk about the person that I have been following. It can be my favorite actor named JX. He has been working on films like Takwondo to Boy, which I love. Approximately two or three years ago, when I was watching TV, I suddenly saw this person fighting enemies, and that really attracted me. Most of the time on social media, he posts tons of pictures of his family, and I'm interested in what they share. The reason I follow this person is that I adore fighting. Additionally, I have been learning the English language, and I mostly watch movies featuring these actors, which are in English.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

Well, I’m going to talk about the person that I have been following him or her. Well, it can be my best loud actor named JX. He has been working on these kinds of films like Takwondo to Boy that I love this movie. Well, approximately three or two years ago when I saw the channels of TV, I suddenly saw this person who fought with enemies. And that’s why it’s like a thing that can attract me. So most time on social media, he might put tons of pictures of his family. And I’m interested in what they are. And the reason why I have been following this person is that I’m a person who adores fighting. And the second reason is that I have been learning English language. And mostly I watch these actors movies which are in English language.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Vocabulary Repetition:

person: 3

that: 3

been: 3

which: 2

fighting: 2

english: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The response is good, but it could be improved by providing more specific details about the actor's posts and the reasons for following him. Elaborating on the connection between the actor's work and the speaker's interest in fighting, and providing more examples of the types of posts, would strengthen the response. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable, but there are some hesitations and repetitions ("Well", "I'm going to talk about the person that I have been following him or her"). A more confident and smoother delivery would improve fluency. The structure is mostly coherent, but could benefit from clearer transitions between points. For example, instead of "And the second reason is that", a more sophisticated transition could be used, such as "Furthermore," or "In addition to my interest in fighting, I also follow him because..."

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like "tons of pictures" are simple and could be replaced with more precise and descriptive language. Using more specific vocabulary related to the actor's films or social media presence would enhance the response. For example, instead of "tons of pictures", you could say "a plethora of family photos" or "many candid shots of his family life."

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are some grammatical inaccuracies, such as "I have been following him or her." The grammar is mostly correct, but more complex sentence structures and a wider range of grammatical forms would improve the score. The use of the present perfect continuous ("I have been following") is good, but could be varied with other tenses for a more natural flow. Consider using more sophisticated sentence structures, such as passive voice or embedded clauses.

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Band 6+: 🔥 PART-2 | TOPIC-77. PERSON YOU FOLLOW ON SOCIAL MEDIA (NOV 2024 - APR 2025) ⭐ Describe a person you follow on social media. You should say: 🔵 who this person is 🔵 how you know this person 🔵 what this person posts on social media 🔵 explain why you follow this person

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