Band 4+: 1. What are the advantages and disadvantages of using social media?

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The answer attempts to address the question by listing some disadvantages of social media, but it does not mention any advantages, which is required by the question. The response is incomplete and lacks development. Additionally, the phrasing is unclear and contains grammatical errors that affect comprehension. To improve, ensure both sides of the question are covered, provide specific examples or explanations, and use clearer, more natural language.

The answer lacks a clear structure and does not fully address the question by discussing both advantages and disadvantages. There is significant hesitation ('Hmm'), incomplete sentences, and a lack of cohesive devices to link ideas. To improve, organize the answer with an introduction, clear separation of advantages and disadvantages, and use linking words like 'on the one hand' and 'on the other hand'.

Vocabulary is limited and imprecise. Words like 'destruction' and 'unscammed' are used incorrectly or are non-standard. The answer lacks range and flexibility. To improve, learn topic-specific vocabulary (e.g., 'connectivity', 'misinformation', 'privacy concerns') and practice using synonyms to avoid repetition.

There are several grammatical errors, such as 'Mr. Maldives of Social Media' (unclear), 'If people who use social media, other than anything has had problems' (fragmented and incorrect subject-verb agreement), and 'Person that can be be unscammed' (repetition and wrong word form). The answer lacks a full range of structures. To improve, practice forming complete sentences with correct tenses and subject-verb agreement, and use a mix of simple and complex sentences.