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Band 4+: 6. Why is the number of joint families decreasing in modern time?

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The number of joint families is decreasing rapidly in the modern world. This is due to several factors, including the increasing availability of online resources and devices. People are less reliant on extended family for support and companionship, as they can connect with others virtually. Additionally, the rise of individualism and nuclear families has contributed to the decline of joint families. Furthermore, economic factors, such as the need for individual careers and financial independence, have also played a role in this trend.

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Uh, this case has been rapidly growing in this modern world. Um, since there is availability of every online resources and um, every online devicesount of jointies are diffusasing in this time. Um, people don’t feel lonely because of evenuation of every uh, resources and facilities they want. Uh, they are able to talk uh, face to face in a virtual old with the help of Internet.

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joint: 2

factors: 2

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Task Response

The answer is partially relevant to the question. The student mentions the availability of online resources and devices, but fails to fully address the reasons behind the decline of joint families. The answer lacks depth and fails to explore other contributing factors such as individualism, nuclear families, and economic independence. The student should focus on providing a more comprehensive explanation of the reasons for the decline of joint families.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is somewhat disjointed and lacks a clear structure. The student uses fillers like "um" and "uh" frequently, which disrupts the flow of the answer. The answer also lacks clear transitions between ideas, making it difficult to follow the student's line of reasoning. The student should focus on organizing their thoughts and using more cohesive devices to connect their ideas.

Lexical Resource

The student uses some relevant vocabulary, such as "online resources" and "devices." However, the vocabulary is not particularly sophisticated or precise. The student could use more specific and nuanced vocabulary to express their ideas more effectively. For example, instead of "online resources," the student could use "social media platforms" or "online communication tools." The student should focus on expanding their vocabulary and using more precise language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The answer contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect word choices and sentence structure. For example, the student uses "jointies" instead of "joint families" and "evenuation" instead of "evolution." The student also struggles with subject-verb agreement and tense consistency. The student should focus on improving their grammatical accuracy and using a wider range of grammatical structures.

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