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Band 6+: Advantages and disadvantages of Cashless society

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Now I will begin my presentation. Today my topic is whether the world would ever be a cashless society or not. Let's talk about its benefits and disadvantages, and then I will share my personal opinion and tell you the current trend of how a cashless society is becoming prevalent among our people. As we all know, in the last 5 years, 80% of people have moved from physical cash to online cash. Let's talk about the advantages of a cashless society. Convenience: online cash is convenient; it can be transferred easily from one person to another. We don't have to face the hassle of carrying cash with us. The second advantage of this topic is security. We don't have to worry about making sure our payments are secure and that robbers will leave it. So we don't have to face issues regarding this. The third advantage is efficiency. It is really quick, and we don't have to face...

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Now I will begin my presentation. Today my topic is whether world would ever be a cashless society or not. Let’s talk about its benefits and disadvantages and then I will share my personal opinion and I will tell you the current trend how cashless society is now becoming in our peoples. As we all know from last 5 years 80% of people now move from physically cash to online cash. Let’s talk about the advantages of cashless society. Convenience. Online cash is convenient it can transfer easily from one person to another. We don’t have to face a hassle while carrying cash with us and the second advantage of this topic is secure. We don’t have to face a hassle of making that our payments are secure and robbers will left it. So we don’t have to face issues regarding this. Third advantage is efficiency. It is really quick and we don’t have to face…

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Vocabulary Repetition:

have: 5

cash: 4

don't: 4

will: 3

cashless: 3

society: 3

about: 3

face: 3

topic: 2

let's: 2

people: 2

online: 2

advantage: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The answer is a good start, but it needs further development. While the introduction is clear, the discussion of advantages lacks depth and specific examples. The answer should elaborate on each advantage with concrete illustrations and explore the disadvantages in a similar manner. Including personal experiences would strengthen the response. The current trend should be supported by evidence and analysis, not just a general statement. Focus on fully addressing both advantages and disadvantages to improve the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent, but the fluency could be improved. There are some instances of repetition and self-correction. Try to speak more smoothly and naturally, pausing less frequently between ideas. Work on transitions between points to make the flow more seamless. For example, instead of simply stating 'The second advantage is...', use a transition phrase like 'In addition to convenience, another key benefit is security...'

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. While the speaker uses words like "convenience," "secure," and "efficiency," more precise and nuanced vocabulary would elevate the response. Consider using synonyms and more descriptive language to enrich the vocabulary. For example, instead of 'online cash,' use 'digital transactions' or 'electronic payments.' Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some minor errors and inconsistencies. The sentence structure is sometimes simple and repetitive. Work on using more complex grammatical structures, such as passive voice and subordinate clauses, to demonstrate a wider range of grammatical accuracy. Pay attention to articles (a, an, the) and prepositions.

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