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Band 6+: are natural views are better than city views

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Probably, I agree with this statement because natural views are more important than city views as they provide us with many aspects. As we know, tourism is related to countries' natural views and city views. However, in most cases, tourists come to your country because of its natural views, how they are constructed, and how they are developed. They are also interested in city views. That's why I believe natural views are better than city views. Additionally, natural views are more costly and carry a higher status, and that's why I think so.

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Probably I agree with this statement because natural views are more important than city views because it provides us with many aspects. As we know tourism is related to countries’ natural views and also city views. But in most cases, tourists come to your country because of its natural views, how they are constructed, how they are developed. And in most cases, they are interested in city views, natural views. That’s why I believe natural views are better than city views and also natural views are more costly and it more it includes high status on itself and that’s why I think so

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