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Band 7+: are there any times when it is best not to share their feelings

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Yeah, it's really vital for every person to consider feelings as private aspects of their life. We can't share our feelings and thoughts with every person and in any situation. The majority of people don't care about our feelings and thoughts, or there may be someone who can take advantage of our negative feelings. So we should master our feelings and share them with particular people.

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Yeah, that’s really vital for every person to consider the feelings as private aspects of their life. Because we couldn’t share our feelings and thoughts with every person and in any situation. Because the majority of people don’t care about our feelings and our thoughts or even there were someone who can take advantage from our negative feelings. So we should just master our feelings and share with some particular person.

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

feelings: 5

every: 2

person: 2

share: 2

thoughts: 2

people: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The answer is well-organized and coherent, directly addressing the question. Consider providing specific examples to illustrate your points and strengthen the response. Expanding on the types of situations or people to avoid sharing feelings with would enhance the answer.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. There is some repetition and slightly hesitant phrasing ("Because we couldn't share our feelings and thoughts with every person and in any situation. Because"), but the overall message is clear and well-organized. Improving the flow by removing the repetition would enhance the fluency.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like "vital," "master our feelings," and "take advantage" show a good range. However, more precise vocabulary could be used in places. For example, instead of 'master our feelings,' consider 'manage our feelings' or 'regulate our emotions' for a more nuanced expression.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly correct, but there are a few minor errors. The sentence 'Because the majority of people don't care about our feelings and our thoughts or even there were someone who can take advantage from our negative feelings' is grammatically awkward and contains a tense error ('were' should be 'is'). More complex grammatical structures could be used to improve the score. For example, using subordinate clauses more effectively would add sophistication.

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