Band 7+: Are there any types of animals that you think should not be kept as a pet?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

This is an excellent response that directly addresses the question and provides clear reasons. Consider exploring the ethical implications of keeping exotic animals as pets in more depth for even greater impact.

The answer is coherent and well-structured. Minor repetition of "really" could be reduced for a more sophisticated flow. The ideas are presented logically and clearly.

Vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. Words like "harmful" and "terrible" are effective. More precise vocabulary could be used; for example, instead of "damage," consider "significant harm" or "substantial damage." A wider range of vocabulary would elevate the score.

Grammar is mostly accurate, with a few minor errors. The sentence beginning with "And it can provide" is slightly awkward and grammatically incorrect. Improving sentence structure and using more complex grammatical structures would improve the score. Consider using more varied sentence structures to enhance the overall grammatical range.