Band 6+: are there many animals or birds where you live? why/whynot?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The response is relevant to the question and provides a clear reason for the change in animal population. However, expanding on the impact of the village program and providing specific examples of animals previously present would strengthen the answer.

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. There is a slight stumble in describing the past situation, using "feud or many castles" which is not quite accurate. Smoother transitions between ideas would improve fluency. Consider rephrasing to something like, "In the past, my neighborhood had many fields and open spaces where animals could thrive."

Vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise. The phrase "filled up" is a bit vague. More specific vocabulary, such as 'developed,' 'urbanized,' or 'built upon,' would enhance the response. The word 'thrive' is well-chosen in the refined answer and would be a good replacement for 'raise and to feed up'.

Grammar is mostly accurate, with a few minor errors. The phrase "many feud or many castles" is grammatically incorrect. The sentence structure is generally sound, but more complex sentence structures would demonstrate a wider range. Consider using a wider variety of tenses and sentence structures to improve this aspect.