Band 6+: Are you better at taking photos of landscapes or people?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response somewhat addresses the question but includes irrelevant information. The answer starts by saying the speaker is good at taking photos of both landscapes and people, but then focuses primarily on taking photos and videos of people, particularly group mates, and recalling memories. This drifts away from directly comparing the two subjects (landscapes vs. people). To improve, focus on directly comparing your skills and preferences for photographing landscapes versus people, providing specific reasons or examples for your choice.

The response is somewhat coherent, but there are noticeable hesitations and some rambling. The ideas are not always clearly linked. Try to organize your thoughts more clearly before speaking and use cohesive devices to connect your ideas more smoothly. For example, use phrases like 'In addition,' 'Furthermore,' or 'On the other hand' to transition between points.

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and variety. The phrase 'everybody adored doing this acting' is not the most natural way to express that idea. Use more specific and varied vocabulary to enhance your descriptions. For example, instead of 'adored doing this acting,' you could say 'enjoys performing' or 'loves being in front of the camera.'

There are several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'I love to keep all memories in my son' should be 'I love to keep all memories in my mind,' and 'after that I watch this video and recalls' should be 'after that, I watch these videos and recall those moments.' Focus on using correct verb tenses and subject-verb agreement. Practice constructing more complex sentences while maintaining accuracy.