Band 7+: Are you or do you know a person who is allergic to seafood?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The response is relevant to the question and demonstrates good communication. Consider focusing more directly on the allergy itself and providing more details about its effects on your sister. Elaborating on the types of seafood she is allergic to and the reactions she experiences would strengthen the response.

The answer is coherent and easy to follow. There is a slight hesitation, indicated by "But I think", which could be smoothed out for improved fluency. Consider using more sophisticated linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly.

The vocabulary is adequate and appropriate for the topic. Words like "allergic" and "strong" are used correctly. More sophisticated vocabulary could be used to describe the sister's strength or the speaker's worry. For example, instead of "strong," consider using "resilient" or "robust." Instead of "worried," consider using "concerned" or "apprehensive."

The grammar is mostly accurate. The sentence structure is simple but effective. The use of the simple present tense is consistent and correct. To improve, try incorporating more complex sentence structures and grammatical features to demonstrate a wider range.