Band 6+: are you student or working

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The response directly answers the question and provides additional relevant information. The answer is generally clear and easy to understand. To improve, focus on providing more specific details and examples to support your statements.

The response is generally fluent and coherent. The ideas are connected, but there's room for improvement in using cohesive devices more naturally. For example, instead of directly stating 'In my future,' you could integrate it more smoothly into the preceding sentence. Try to avoid abrupt shifts in topic.

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and varied. Using 'develop' is a bit vague. Consider using more specific words related to business skills or personal growth. For example, 'hone my skills' or 'cultivate my entrepreneurial spirit' would add more depth. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

There are some grammatical errors, such as 'study in German school' (should be 'study at a German school') and 'to be my life beautiful' (should be 'to make my life beautiful'). While the overall meaning is clear, accuracy needs improvement. Focus on using correct prepositions and verb forms.