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Band 6+: Are you the kind of person who sticks to dreams?

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In my opinion, I can't describe myself as a person who will do everything to achieve my goals or dreams. For me, it's necessary to be the better version of myself to achieve every goal that I want to have.

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In my opinion, I can’t describe myself as a person who will do everything to achieve my goals or dreams. Because for me, it’s so necessary to be the better version of myself to achieve every goals what I want to have.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

myself: 2

achieve: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The response is relevant to the question and provides a personal opinion. However, it could benefit from further elaboration on what steps are taken to improve oneself and how this relates to achieving goals. More specific examples would strengthen the answer.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent, but the phrasing could be more concise and natural. The slight repetition and slightly hesitant delivery ('In my opinion...Because for me...') detract from the fluency. Focus on smoother transitions and a more confident delivery.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. Words like 'better version of myself' are a bit generic. Try to use more precise and nuanced vocabulary to express your ideas. For example, instead of 'better version,' consider words like 'improved,' 'enhanced,' or 'more developed' depending on the context.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate, but there are some minor errors. The phrase 'every goals what I want to have' is grammatically incorrect. It should be 'every goal I want to achieve' or 'all the goals I aspire to.' Work on improving grammatical accuracy and sentence structure for a higher score. Consider using more complex sentence structures to demonstrate a wider range.

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