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Band 7+: Can a hospital function effectively without nurses?

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It is impossible to imagine a hospital without nurses. Nurses are like the oxygen of a hospital. Just as a human being cannot live without breathing oxygen, patients can never recover without the support of a nurse. Nurses work shoulder to shoulder with doctors for the improvement of a patient. They play an important role in the medical field. Therefore, we can never imagine a hospital without nurses.

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It is impossible to imagine a hospital without nurses. Nurses are like the oxygen of a hospital. As a human being cannot live without breathing oxygen, similarly, patients can never recover without the support of a nurse. Nurses are working shoulder to shoulder with doctors for improvement of a patient. Nurses play an important role in the medical field. So, we can never imagine a hospital without a nurse.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

without: 4

nurses: 4

hospital: 3

imagine: 2

oxygen: 2

never: 2

shoulder: 2

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Pronunciation

7.5

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Task Response

The answer is well-organized and clearly communicates the importance of nurses in a hospital setting. Consider expanding on the specific roles and contributions of nurses to further illustrate their indispensable role. Using a variety of vocabulary and sentence structures would enhance the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and well-organized. The ideas flow logically, and the use of cohesive devices like 'similarly' and 'therefore' is effective. While the fluency is good, minor improvements could be made by slightly varying sentence structure to avoid some repetition. For example, instead of repeating 'Nurses' at the beginning of consecutive sentences, you could use synonyms or rephrase the sentences.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is precise and appropriate for the topic. The metaphor of nurses being 'the oxygen of a hospital' is particularly effective. While the vocabulary is strong, using a wider range of synonyms for 'nurse' and 'important' would enhance the response.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is mostly accurate, with only minor errors. The sentence 'Nurses are working shoulder to shoulder with doctors for improvement of a patient' could be improved by adding 'the' before 'improvement' and changing 'working' to 'work'. Using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as passive voice or more complex sentence constructions, would improve the score.

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