Band 6+: Descibe a person you know who uses the Internet too much?

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The answer is quite good and covers the topic well. However, to improve, you could add more details about the consequences of your friend's excessive internet use on his life, such as his physical or mental health, relationships, or academic performance. You could also expand on the specific games he plays and the tournaments he participates in. Adding more specific examples will make your answer more engaging and convincing. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The answer is coherent and mostly fluent. Minor repetition and a slightly awkward phrase ("a two-tone") detract from the overall fluency. Consider rephrasing the introduction to be more concise and natural-sounding. For example, instead of "When it comes to a person who goes online all the time, I have to go for a two-tone," you could say, "I know someone who spends excessive time online."

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. The phrase "two-tone" is inappropriate and should be replaced. While the vocabulary is functional, using more precise and sophisticated vocabulary would improve the score. For example, instead of "addicted to games," you could use "has a gaming addiction." Consider using synonyms to avoid repetition.

The grammar is mostly accurate, but there are a few errors. The sentence "That's sometimes he goes online..." is grammatically incorrect. The use of "use internet" is also grammatically incorrect; it should be "uses the internet." Improving grammatical accuracy and sentence structure will significantly improve the score. Consider using more complex sentence structures to demonstrate a wider range of grammatical abilities.