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Band 4+: Descibe someone you know who has started a business You should say Who this person is What work this person does Why this person decided to start a business and explian whether you would like to fo the same kind of work as this person

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I'd like to talk about my friend who started a clothing business in the city. She runs a retail store that sells all kinds of clothes, from baby clothes to adult fashion. She decided to start her own business because she has a passion for fashion and wanted to be her own boss. While I admire her entrepreneurial spirit, I wouldn't want to do the same kind of work myself. I prefer a more creative and less customer-facing role.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

I like to talk about my friend who started her many business in city area. She is doing the business, uh, of the rail in which sells all kinds of clothes, love clothes of, um, babies and adults as well as of old m peoples.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

business: 2

clothes: 2

fashion: 2

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Pronunciation

4.5

Your pronunciation is below average and may be understood with some effort. Pay attention to common phonemes that are challenging for you.

Task Response

The answer provides some information about the friend's business, but it lacks detail and depth. The student could have elaborated on the friend's motivations for starting the business and provided more specific examples of the types of clothes sold. The student also did not fully address the final part of the question about whether they would like to do the same kind of work. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

3.5

The answer is somewhat disjointed and lacks fluency. The student uses fillers like 'uh' and 'um' and struggles to find the right words at times. The answer could be more coherent with smoother transitions between ideas.

Lexical Resource

3.5

The student uses some basic vocabulary related to business and clothing, but the language is not particularly sophisticated. The student could use more specific and descriptive vocabulary to enhance their answer.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The answer contains some grammatical errors, such as the use of 'of' instead of 'for' and the incorrect use of 'old m peoples'. The student could improve their grammatical accuracy by paying more attention to subject-verb agreement and using correct prepositions.

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