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Band 4+: Descibe someone you know who has started a business You should say Who this person is What work this person does Why this person decided to start a business and explian whether you would like to fo the same kind of work as this person

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I'd like to talk about a friend who recently started her own business. Her name is Iris, and she runs a clothing boutique. She's become quite popular in our community because she offers a wide range of services and provides people with high-quality, reliable clothing items. I admire her entrepreneurial spirit and her passion for fashion, but I wouldn't want to do the same kind of work myself. I prefer a more creative and less customer-facing role.

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I would like to talk about a friend who has started her, uh, business recently. She isrii, and she has a business of, uh, clothes. She is now becoming a popular, uh, business lady in my community. Because she provide all kinds of, uh, services. And also give people a, um, more, um, reliable clothes items.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Pronunciation

6.5

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Task Response

The student provides a good description of the friend's business, but they don't fully explain why the friend decided to start the business. They could have elaborated on the friend's motivations, such as a passion for fashion or a desire for independence. The student also doesn't fully explain why they wouldn't want to do the same kind of work, only mentioning a preference for a more creative role. They could have expanded on this by mentioning specific examples of creative roles they find appealing. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The student speaks with a good pace and rhythm, but there are some hesitations and filler words, such as "uh" and "um." The student could improve their fluency by practicing speaking more naturally and confidently.

Lexical Resource

The student uses a good range of vocabulary, but there are some instances of imprecise language, such as "provide all kinds of services." They could have used more specific and descriptive language to enhance their vocabulary.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The student demonstrates a good grasp of grammar, but there are some minor errors, such as "She isrii" and "give people a, um, more, um, reliable clothes items." They could improve their grammatical accuracy by paying more attention to subject-verb agreement and sentence structure.

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Band 4+: Descibe someone you know who has started a business You should say Who this person is What work this person does Why this person decided to start a business and explian whether you would like to fo the same kind of work as this person

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