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Band 6+: Describe a family member you admire You should say: Who that person is What that person looks like What kind of person he is And explain why you admire that person

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I would like to talk about my brother, whom I deeply admire. He has always been a role model for me, not just because of his hard work, but also because of his love for us. He is very handsome and tall, just like the characters in movies. Not only in appearance, but also in his attitude and love for people. I want to become like him.

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I would like to talk about my brother whom I deeply admire. He has always been a role model for me, not just because of his hard work, but also because of his love for us. He is very handsome and tall just like the characters in the movie. Not only appearance, but his attitude and love for people. I want to become like him.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

like: 3

because: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is very good. Aim to refine subtleties and intonation to further improve.

Task Response

4.5

The response is a good start, fulfilling the basic requirements of the task. However, to improve, more details and specific examples are needed to support the claims made. Elaborating on your brother's hard work and love for the family with specific anecdotes would significantly enhance the response. Adding more descriptive details about his appearance and personality would also make the answer more engaging and convincing. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

6.5

The answer is coherent and easy to follow. There is a slight lack of detail in describing the brother's personality beyond 'hardworking' and 'loving.' Expanding on specific examples of these traits would improve fluency and coherence. Minor repetition of 'not only...but also' could be avoided for better flow.

Lexical Resource

5.5

Vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and varied. Phrases like 'very handsome' and 'love for us' are simple. Using more descriptive adjectives and specific examples to illustrate the brother's character would enhance lexical resource. The phrase 'just like the characters in the movie' is a bit vague and could be improved.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6.5

Grammar is mostly accurate with only minor errors. The sentence 'Not only appearance, but his attitude and love for people' is grammatically incorrect and could be improved by restructuring. Using a wider range of grammatical structures would improve the score. The answer is concise and could benefit from more complex sentence structures.

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