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Band 5+: Describe a goal you are determined to achieve. You should say: - What the goal is - Why you want to achieve it - What steps you have taken so far And explain what challenges you anticipate facing.

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I really want to achieve speaking English better. I chose this goal because English is important for communication, and I want to feel confident when I talk. So far, I practice English a little every day. I watch English videos, learn simple new words, and try to talk to people in English. The challenges I face are forgetting words and feeling shy. I will overcome them by practicing more, staying calm, and not worrying about mistakes. I know I will improve if I keep trying.

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I really want to achieve is speaking English better. I chose this role because English is important for communication and I want to feel confident when I talk. So far I practice English a little everyday. I watch English videos, learn simple new words and try to talk to people in English. the challenges my face are forgetting words and feeling shy, I will overcome them by practicing more, staying calm and not worrying about mistakes. I know I will improve if I keep trying.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

english: 5

words: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The response addresses the topic and attempts to cover all the bullet points. However, the development of each point could be more detailed and specific. Consider elaborating on the reasons for setting the goal, the specific steps taken, and the challenges faced. Providing more concrete examples and personal experiences would enhance the response. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is generally coherent and follows a logical structure, addressing all parts of the prompt. However, there are some pauses and hesitations that slightly affect the fluency. To improve, focus on speaking more continuously and using linking words to connect ideas more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, but it is quite basic. The candidate uses simple words and phrases. To enhance the lexical resource, try to incorporate more varied and sophisticated vocabulary related to language learning and personal goals. For example, instead of 'speaking English better,' you could say 'achieving fluency in English' or 'attaining a higher level of English proficiency.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammatical accuracy is generally good, but there are a few minor errors. For example, 'the challenges my face' should be 'the challenges I face.' To improve, pay closer attention to sentence structure and word order. Also, try to use a wider range of grammatical structures to demonstrate greater proficiency.

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Band 5+: Describe a goal you are determined to achieve. You should say: - What the goal is - Why you want to achieve it - What steps you have taken so far And explain what challenges you anticipate facing.

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Describe a goal you are determined to achieve. You should say: – What the goal is – Why you want to achieve it – What steps you have taken so far And explain what challenges you anticipate facing.

Describe a goal you are determined to achieve. You should say: – What the goal is – Why you want to achieve it – What steps you have taken so far And explain what challenges you anticipate facing.

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