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Band 4+: Describe a job that is useful to the society You should say: What job it is How you know about this job What types of people do this job And explain why you think this job is useful to the society

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There are many people who have energy or enthusiasm in my life. I have seen many people among them, more energetic individuals. Today, I would like to talk about a particular person I know, and that person is very energetic. This is none other than my uncle. He is 16 years old. He is not only an energetic person but also a social worker. He makes many decisions and can handle any hard situation. He is compassionate and he is a matriarch. He is not only energetic but also a generous person. He helps many poor families and provides many essential things in our daily lives. He is a creative person and always offers various resources like...

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There are many persons who have an energetic or stupidity in my whole life. I have seen many people among them, more people, many energetic. How about today I would like to know about a particular person that I know and the person is an energetic. This is none other than my uncle. He is 16 years old. He is not only an energetic person but also a suicide worker. He takes many decisions. He can take any decision, any hard situation. He has a stupidity and he is a matriarch. He is not only an energetic person but also a generous person. He helps many poor families. He provides many essential things in our daily lives. He is a creative person. He always provides various things like…

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person: 5

energetic: 4

people: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The response does not fully address all parts of the question. It focuses heavily on describing a person rather than a job. To improve, the answer should clearly identify a specific job, explain how the speaker knows about it (e.g., through personal experience, media, etc.), describe the typical people who do this job, and clearly explain its societal usefulness with specific examples. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is not very coherent. The speaker jumps between ideas and doesn't always connect them logically. There's a lot of repetition and the structure is weak. Work on creating a clearer structure with a beginning, middle, and end. Practice using transition words to connect your ideas more smoothly. Avoid unnecessary repetition.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is quite limited and not very precise. Words like "energetic" and "stupid" are used repeatedly and don't fully capture the nuances of the uncle's work. Expand your vocabulary to describe the social worker's actions and qualities more accurately. Use more specific and descriptive language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors throughout the answer, including incorrect word order, tense inconsistencies, and subject-verb agreement issues. The sentences are often simple and lack complexity. Focus on improving grammatical accuracy and expanding your sentence structures. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures to express your ideas more effectively.

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