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Band 4+: Describe a job you would not like to do in the future

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There are a lot of options for people to become professionals in their life, and they can be actually very central. But it's a very stressful and highly demanding part of this job that it's very difficult to find since the part-time charter is very busy. I had a conversation about this job from my brother, and he is also a part of it. He told me that this is very stressful and arduous. So, I am an introvert person. I seem very uncomfortable to talk with people, and it is very difficult for me to have communication with them. I never talk so much to any other person. So, this job, I um, don't want to do because job sales is also done online. So, a person has to pay attention online also, and if any person makes a call, then we have to pick up and answer. It is a very stressful and challenging job. I see that this is not right for me to take up in the future because I am not interested in this. I have the ability to not manage sales, and doing this over this is that I don't like it.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

There are not of options for people to become profess in their life and they can by actually it very central but is very streful and highly demanding part in this job that it’very difficult to findince the part time charter buy a I had a about job from my brother and he is also aart and he told me that this is very stressful andous so I am an introvert person I seem very uncomfortable to talk with the people and it is very difficulted for me to u having communication with them and I never talk so much to any other question so this job I um don’t want to do because job sales is also done online so person to pay attention online also and if any person make call then we have to pick up and answerelf it is a very stressful and sel I see that this not right for we to take superue in and future because I am not I not interested in this I have the ability to canot manage saloid doing this over this is that I don’t like.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

very: 8

this: 8

that: 4

person: 4

stressful: 3

also: 3

have: 3

people: 2

difficult: 2

don't: 2

because: 2

sales: 2

online: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The student provides a clear description of a job they wouldn't like to do, but the answer lacks depth and specific details. They mention the job is stressful and demanding, but they could elaborate on why this is the case and provide more specific examples. For example, they could mention the pressure to meet sales targets or the constant interaction with customers. The student also mentions being an introvert, but they could expand on this by explaining how this personality trait would make the job difficult for them. Overall, the answer is relevant to the topic but lacks the depth and detail required for a higher score.

Fluency & Coherence

The student's speech is somewhat hesitant and disjointed, with frequent pauses and repetitions. The answer lacks a clear structure and logical flow. The student could improve their fluency by practicing speaking more naturally and using connecting words and phrases to link their ideas together. For example, they could use phrases like 'in addition to this' or 'on the other hand' to connect their thoughts.

Lexical Resource

The student uses a range of vocabulary, but there are some errors and inaccuracies. For example, they use the phrase 'part-time charter' which is not a common expression. They also use the word 'arduous' which is a more formal word and may not be appropriate for this context. The student could improve their lexical resource by using more precise and appropriate vocabulary.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The student makes several grammatical errors throughout the answer. For example, they use incorrect tenses, such as 'I have the ability to canot manage sales'. They also use incorrect prepositions, such as 'over this is that I don't like it'. The student could improve their grammatical accuracy by practicing using different grammatical structures and paying attention to the correct use of tenses and prepositions.

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