If I have the chance to enact lord, I guess I will enact a ban on people who are under 18 using mobile phone in our country. These lors can solve one of the headaches in our countries that people using too much mobile phone and I can upates new law. Um, mainly because first no more and more children become short sightists nowadays because using phoness can do some damage to their eyes sides which is irreversible. And besides, the information overload on the mobile phone might be good or bad. And students haven’t have the ability to judge what is right from wrong. So. So they may meet with some pornographic and violent messages which would distort their values. And students have the natures of learning lifestyles and behaviors from the phone. So they may cut their friends with a knife after watching the cartoons or they may use swear words to their parents after watching influencers on TikTok. Although uh, it is quite difficult for countries to publish these policies as it needs the cooperation of all works of life, several departments and schools should provide a strong supervision, while parents should set a role model for children. But im’in the age that mobile phone wasnt common in today, in my day. But todays kids have their phones on their hands. Seeing that how they lost their ability to communicate with people around him, then, um, I feel quite frustrated and sad. So I think wish there’something that I could do to change the development of a country or future of a kid.
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If I had the chance to enact a law, I would introduce a ban on people under 18 using mobile phones in our country. This law could address one of the major concerns in our society: excessive mobile phone use. I believe this new law is necessary primarily because more and more children are developing short-sightedness due to the harmful effects of phone use on their eyes, which can be irreversible. Additionally, the information overload on mobile phones can be both beneficial and detrimental. Students lack the maturity to discern right from wrong, and they may encounter inappropriate content like pornography and violence, which could distort their values. Furthermore, students are susceptible to learning lifestyles and behaviors from what they see on their phones. They might engage in harmful actions like using violence or foul language after watching certain content. While implementing such a policy would be challenging, requiring cooperation from various sectors like schools and parents, it is crucial to provide strong supervision and set positive examples for children. I grew up in an era where mobile phones were not as prevalent as they are today. Witnessing how children have lost their ability to communicate effectively with those around them fills me with frustration and sadness. I wish there was something I could do to positively impact the development of our country and the future of our children.
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