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Band 6+: Describe a newly enacted law that you like but you want to change part of it

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Well, now I'm going to talk about the new law that was enacted in recent years. The law is mainly focused on school students, I mean pupils. This law was imposed about two or three years ago. This law is about restricting phones at school, especially during lessons. This can be useful and beneficial for teachers as they can improve the quality of their lessons. It also helps students who really want to study hard at school. However, the disadvantage that I would change is that the regulations are too strict for this law. For this law, even when students want to or need to search the internet, they can't use searching tools like Chichibiti or Google. I think that is a downside of this law. And that's it, I think.

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Well, now I’m going to talk about the new love that enacted in recent years. Well, the love is mainly focused on school students, I mean pupils. This love is imposed in recent years, about two or three years ago. This love is about restricting phones at school, especially in lessons. This can be useful or this can be beneficial for teachers as they can upgrade their quality of their lessons. And also for whom, I mean students who really want to study hard at school. But the disadvantage of things that I would change is that just the regulations are too strict for this love. So for this love, even when students want to or need to search from the internet, they can’t use searching tools like Chichibiti or Google. I think that is a sleep side of this love. And that’s it, I think.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

this: 6

that: 4

about: 3

school: 3

students: 3

years: 2

lessons: 2

think: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The answer is relevant to the prompt and fulfills the task requirements. However, it lacks depth and detail in explaining the law and the suggested changes. Consider providing more specific examples to illustrate the benefits and drawbacks of the law, and elaborate on the proposed changes with more justification. Adding more details about the specific restrictions and how they impact students would strengthen the response.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is coherent and mostly easy to follow. However, there are a few instances of hesitant speech and filler words ('well,' 'I mean'). Improving fluency would involve reducing these and speaking more smoothly. The structure is simple but effective; a more sophisticated structure might improve the score.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. The candidate uses words like 'beneficial' and 'regulations,' showing some range. However, more precise and nuanced vocabulary would elevate the score. The use of 'Chichibiti' is unusual and may not be understood by all examiners; using a more common search engine name would be better.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical inaccuracies. The candidate uses simple sentence structures predominantly. While the message is understandable, more complex grammatical structures and consistent accuracy are needed for a higher score. For example, the phrase 'This love is about restricting phones...' should be 'This law is about restricting phones...' The candidate also struggles with the correct use of articles and prepositions in several places.

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