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Band 5+: Describe a party that you enjoyed You should say: When and where the party was held Who attended the party What kind of party it was What you did in the party And explain why you enjoyed this party

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I would like to talk about a party that I enjoyed in 2020. My sister's wedding was on February 28th, and my family arranged a big party. This party was held at Amanullah Convention Hall in Silat District. My family invited my friends, parents, and the district counselor or mayor. Many people attended this party. Dinner was arranged for everyone because the party was in the evening. My friends and family enjoyed it so much. I always served the special guests, like the mayor and counselor. This time, I enjoyed it very much, and everyone wore the same clothes.

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I would like to talk about a party that I enjoyed in 2020. This year my sister’s wedding is February 28th. And my family arranged a big party. And this party arranged at Amanullah Convention Hall in Silat District. And my family invited with my friends, parents and district counsellor or mayor. Many people attended this party. This party arranged dinner with all people’s arranged dinner. Because the party arranged night. And my friends and my family enjoyed so much. And I always served the popular guest like mayor counsellor. So this time I enjoyed very much. And all people’s same clothes.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Vocabulary Repetition:

party: 5

enjoyed: 3

family: 3

this: 3

arranged: 2

district: 2

friends: 2

counselor: 2

mayor: 2

everyone: 2

Try using synonyms for the above words

Pronunciation

5.5

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

5.5

The response adequately addresses all parts of the question, providing a clear description of the party. However, more detail and specific examples could enhance the response. Consider expanding on the activities, conversations, or specific moments that made the party enjoyable. Adding sensory details (sights, sounds, smells) would also enrich the description. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable, but the structure could be improved. There is some repetition and slightly hesitant delivery. Try to plan your answer beforehand to improve the flow and reduce repetition. For example, instead of saying "This party arranged dinner," you could say "Dinner was provided for all guests." This is more concise and natural-sounding.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision in places. Words like "arranged" are overused. Try to use more specific and descriptive vocabulary. For example, instead of "many people," you could say "approximately 100 guests" or "a large number of people." Instead of "same clothes," you could describe the style or color of the clothing. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors, such as incorrect use of articles and tense inconsistencies. For example, "This party arranged at Amanullah Convention Hall" should be "This party was held at Amanullah Convention Hall." Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and article usage. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as passive voice and relative clauses, to improve accuracy and sophistication.

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