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Band 6+: Describe a perfect job you would like to have in the future

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I would like to talk about a job I would like to do in the future, which is content creator. First, I am interested in social platforms, especially TikTok and Instagram. Nowadays, many people create videos and earn money online, which really motivates me. To do this job well, I need some important skills such as good communication skills, basic video creation and editing, confidence in front of the camera, and time management. I would like to choose this job because it's flexible and comfortable. I can work online and wherever I want. This job helps me develop my skills and improve my English. So that is why I would like to become a content creator in the future.

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I would like to talk about a job I would like to do in the future, which is content creator. The first I interested in social platform, especially TikTok and Instagram. Nowadays, many people created videos and learn money online, which really motivates me. To do these shops well, I need some important skills such as a good communication skill, basic videos, creating editing, and the confidence in front of the camera, the management time, important shops content creator. I would like to choose like a jobs because it’s flexible and comfortable. I can work online and wherever this shop helps me develop my skills and improve my English. So that is why I would like to become a content creator in the future.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

would: 4

like: 4

this: 3

skills: 3

future: 2

which: 2

content: 2

creator: 2

online: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The response addresses the prompt by describing the desired job of a content creator and provides reasons for this choice. To further enhance the response, consider adding more specific details about the type of content you would create, the target audience, or specific platforms you would focus on. Additionally, elaborating on how the job would help develop your skills and improve your English could strengthen the answer. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is generally coherent, but there are some pauses and hesitations that affect the flow. Using more cohesive devices (e.g., 'furthermore,' 'in addition') could improve the structure. Try to avoid starting multiple sentences with 'I would like'. Vary your sentence structure.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and varied. For example, instead of just saying 'good communication skills,' you could specify what kind of communication skills are needed (e.g., 'persuasive communication,' 'clear articulation'). Expand your vocabulary related to content creation and digital media. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors, such as 'learn money online' (should be 'earn money online') and 'the management time' (should be 'time management'). Also, 'these shops well' should be 'this job well'. Focus on using correct verb tenses and articles. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures to express your ideas more precisely.

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