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Band 6+: Describe a person from your country who has won a prize, award or medal, You should say: who this person is which prize, award or medal they received what they did to win this and explain whether you think it was right that this person received this prize, award or medal.

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I would like to describe a person from my country who has won a prize. His name is Christiane Urvernaldo. He is a football player for Anasar club. He received this award for being the top scorer, having scored 35 goals in a year, if I remember correctly. I believe that he worked hard to achieve this success. I think he practiced a lot, focused on his mental health, and went to the gym. I believe he deserves what he has earned. So, I would like to be like him. He is my favorite player.

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I would like to describe a person from my country who has won a prize. His name is Christiane Urvernaldo. He is a football player for Anasar club. He received this award for being the top scorer player having scored 35 goals in a year, if I remember clearly. And I believe that he worked hard to achieve this success. I think he practiced a lot and he told me for his mental health and go to the gym and I think he deserves what he takes. So I would like to be like him. He is my famous player.

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

like: 3

would: 2

player: 2

believe: 2

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Pronunciation

6.5

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

5.5

The response adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, more detail and specific examples could strengthen the answer. Consider expanding on the training and dedication involved in achieving such a high goal-scoring record. Elaborating on why you believe the award was deserved would also enhance the response. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The response is coherent and easy to follow. There is a slight stumble in the description of the player's training regime, but overall the ideas flow logically. Minor improvements in phrasing would enhance fluency.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate and mostly accurate. More precise language could be used in places. For example, instead of 'he deserves what he takes,' a more sophisticated phrase like 'he deserves the recognition' or 'he deserves the award' would be more impactful. The use of 'famous' could be replaced with 'favorite' or 'renowned' for a more nuanced expression.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammar is mostly accurate with only minor errors. The sentence 'And I believe that he worked hard to achieve this success' could be improved by combining it with the following sentence for better flow. The use of simple sentence structures is acceptable, but incorporating more complex structures would improve the grammatical range.

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