Band 5+: Describe a person someone influenced you?

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The answer is relevant to the question and provides a clear description of the influence. However, more detail and elaboration on specific situations or examples of how Tilak's influence manifested would strengthen the response and make it more engaging. Consider expanding on the types of 'bad things' and how Tilak's actions or words impacted your choices.

The answer is understandable but lacks a smooth flow. There's some repetition and the structure could be improved. Try to use more sophisticated linking words and phrases to connect your ideas more smoothly. For example, instead of simply stating that your friend influenced you, explain how and why. A more structured approach, perhaps using a chronological order or cause-and-effect structure, would improve coherence.

The vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. While the message is clear, using more precise and varied vocabulary would enhance the response. Instead of 'bad things,' try to specify what those things are. Instead of 'dangerous for their health,' you could use more specific terms like 'addictive substances' or 'unhealthy habits.'

There are several grammatical errors, particularly in sentence structure and tense consistency. The phrasing is sometimes awkward. Focus on improving sentence structure and using a wider range of grammatical structures. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and correct use of articles. Practice using more complex sentence structures to demonstrate a wider grammatical range.