Band 5+: Describe a person who encouraged you to achieve your goal

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response is brief and lacks detail. Consider expanding on specific instances where your brother encouraged you and how his actions impacted your progress towards your IELTS goal. More descriptive language would strengthen the response.

The answer is understandable, but the structure could be improved. There's some repetition and the connection between the brother's encouragement and the IELTS preparation in Dhaka isn't clearly explained. Try to create a more logical flow of ideas and use transition words to connect your thoughts more smoothly. For example, you could add a sentence explaining how your brother's encouragement helped you specifically during your IELTS preparation.

The vocabulary is basic. While understandable, more precise and sophisticated vocabulary would improve the score. Instead of 'wonderful person' and 'very good person,' try using more descriptive adjectives to show your brother's positive qualities. For example, you could say he was 'supportive,' 'encouraging,' or 'inspirational.'

There are some grammatical errors, such as 'encouraged my achieve my goal' which should be 'encouraged me to achieve my goal'. The sentence 'Without motivation or inspiration it's very difficult to achieve goals in my life' is grammatically correct but could be improved stylistically. Focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures and ensure accuracy in sentence construction. Practice using different tenses and sentence types to enhance your grammatical range.