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Band 5+: Describe a person who has done a lot of work to help people

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I consider my mom as someone who has done a lot of work to help all members of my family. Therefore, I'm going to talk about my mom. I left home 20 years ago, but whenever I need help, I come to my mom, and we can speak from the heart. My mom gives me very useful advice. Whenever my siblings face some problems, they come to my mom and ask her for help. She definitely helps them. Whenever they need assistance with financial issues, they go to my mom and my dad for support. Therefore, I consider my mom to be selfless. She's very selfless. I can actually describe my mom as someone who is committed and dedicated.

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I consider my mom as someone who has done a lot of work to help all members in my family. Therefore, I’m going to talk about my mom. I live home 20 years ago, but whenever I need help, I come to my mom and we can speak heart to her. My mom gives me some very useful advice. Whenever my siblings have a face with some problem, they come to my mom and ask her to help them. She for sure helps them. Whenever they need help, they come across some financial issues. She’s over there to ask my mom and my father to help my siblings. Therefore, I consider my mom as a selfish. She’s very selfish. I can actually describe my mom as someone who is commitment and dedicated.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

help: 3

whenever: 3

they: 3

consider: 2

someone: 2

therefore: 2

selfless: 2

Try using synonyms for the above words

Pronunciation

5.5

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The answer is quite short and lacks specific details and examples to fully illustrate the extent of the person's work in helping others. Consider providing more concrete examples of your mother's actions and the impact they had on those she helped. Expanding on the types of help provided and the positive outcomes would strengthen the response. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is somewhat coherent, but there are a few instances of unclear phrasing and minor inconsistencies. For example, the phrase "speak heart to her" is unclear. The speaker also initially describes their mother as selfish, then corrects to selfless. Improving the flow and precision of language would enhance fluency and coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate, but not particularly sophisticated. The speaker uses some slightly informal language ("face with some problem"). Expanding vocabulary and using more precise word choices would improve this aspect.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors, including incorrect use of prepositions ("live home," "come across some financial issues") and subject-verb agreement issues. The speaker also uses the incorrect word "selfish" initially. Focusing on grammatical accuracy and using a wider range of grammatical structures would significantly improve the score.

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