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Band 5+: Describe a person who has done a lot of work to help people

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I know a person who works hard to help others, and this is related to my family. He is my uncle. He has been living in a way that emphasizes hard work. At the end of the year, he also sends money to help others because he thinks that helping others is a very good thing. He sends money to support people like orphans, and he also takes part in charity centers.

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I know a person who work hard to help you but this is related to my family. He is my uncle. He has been living in the way to work hard. And at the end of year he also send money to help you but because he think that helping other is very good thing so he send some money to help people like orphans and they also take apart and charity center.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

others: 3

sends: 2

money: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

4.5

The answer is good and covers the topic. However, it lacks specific details and examples to illustrate the uncle's work. Adding more specific examples of the help provided, the impact of his actions, and more details about his involvement in charity would significantly improve the response. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

5.5

The answer is understandable, but the fluency could be improved. There are some grammatical errors and unnatural phrasing that disrupt the flow. Focus on smoother transitions between ideas and using more sophisticated sentence structures. Practice speaking more naturally and at a consistent pace.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and range. While the meaning is conveyed, more sophisticated vocabulary could enhance the response. Try to use more descriptive words and avoid repetition. For example, instead of 'send money to help people,' consider using phrases like 'donates to charitable causes' or 'provides financial assistance to the needy'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

There are several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses and preposition usage. Work on improving accuracy in verb conjugation and prepositional phrases. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as passive voice and complex sentences, to demonstrate a higher level of grammatical proficiency.

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