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Band 4+: Describe a person who runs a family business who the person is what business this person does what products it sells what you have learned from this person

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So, how do you talk about the reason why you call her a westerner? That's my mother. Her name is Parizodon and she is a strong and hardworking woman. I think that the reason why they decided to operate a small bakery shop is that her products are sweet such as cakes, puddings and a lot of sweet taste. Besides these qualities, she is also intelligent and a good manager because she often gives on special occasions such as Christmas and create small birthday parties for her customers to attract more people to her shop. What I admire about her is her qualities, I admire about her is her confidence and intelligence. Once she says that I have the face challenge, I learned from the experience of finding mistakes. Don't be afraid of making mistakes because they can be a busy basis for my growth. I always look after her and love my mom very much in the future. I want to become a confident and successful person, and be a discipline like my mother.

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So, how do you talk about the reason why you call her a westerner? That’s my mother. Her name is Parizodon and she is a strong and hardworking woman. I think that the reason why they decided to operate a small bakery shop is that her products are sweet such as cakes, puddings and a lot of sweet taste. Besides these qualities, she is also intelligent and a good manager because she often gives on special occasions such as Christmas and create small birthday parties for her customers to attract more people to her shop. What I admire about her is her qualities, I admire about her is her confidence and intelligence. Once she says that I have the face challenge, I learned from the experience of finding mistakes. Don’t be afraid of making mistakes because they can be a busy basis for my growth. I always look after her and love my mom very much in the future. I want to become a confident and successful person, and be a discipline like my mother.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

about: 3

that: 3

reason: 2

mother: 2

small: 2

sweet: 2

qualities: 2

because: 2

admire: 2

mistakes: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

The answer addresses the topic but has some issues. It identifies the person (mother) and the business (bakery shop), but the description of the products is vague and the details about what was learned are somewhat unclear. The response lacks specific examples and personal experiences. To improve, provide more concrete details about the business, such as the types of products, the daily operations, and specific lessons learned from the mother's management style. Also, ensure the response is well-organized and stays on topic throughout.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer lacks clear organization and coherence. The opening question is confusing and not relevant to the topic. There is no clear structure with an introduction, body, and conclusion. The ideas are presented in a disjointed manner, with abrupt shifts from describing the business to personal qualities. Repetition and self-correction are frequent (e.g., 'What I admire about her is her qualities, I admire about her is her confidence'). To improve, plan your answer with a clear structure: introduce the person, describe the business, explain what you learned, and conclude. Use cohesive devices to link ideas smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and repetitive. Words like 'sweet', 'qualities', and 'admire' are overused. There is some attempt to use descriptive language (e.g., 'strong and hardworking', 'intelligent and a good manager'), but it lacks precision and variety. Phrases like 'a lot of sweet taste' are awkward. To improve, expand your vocabulary with synonyms and more specific terms. For example, instead of 'sweet', use 'confectionery', 'pastries', or 'desserts'. Use idiomatic expressions and precise adjectives to enhance your description.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are numerous grammatical errors and awkward constructions. For example, 'how do you talk about the reason why you call her a westerner?' is incorrect and confusing. 'I think that the reason why they decided to operate a small bakery shop is that her products are sweet' is grammatically awkward. 'Once she says that I have the face challenge' is unclear and incorrect. 'They can be a busy basis for my growth' is a misuse of 'busy'. The answer lacks a range of sentence structures, relying mostly on simple sentences. To improve, practice using a variety of complex and compound sentences, and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct tense usage.

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