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Band 6+: "Describe a person you admire" You should say: Who his person is How you got to know this person What this person does

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When I think of someone I admire, I first think of my father. He is the perfect embodiment of the characteristics of hard work and understanding of how society works. He is more than just a family member to me; he is also an important mentor whom I seek for advice every time I need it. He has always been hardworking and conscientious. This is proven by how he opened an English center in the 1980s.

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When I think of someone who I admire, I think first of my father. He is the perfect embodiment of the characteristic of working and understanding of how society works. He is more than just a family member to me, but he is also an important mentor that I care for advice every time I need it. He has always been hardworking and conscientious. This is proven true how he opened an English center in the 1980s.

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The response is a good start, fulfilling the basic requirements of the task. However, to improve, more details about the person and your relationship with them are needed. Elaborate on specific instances that showcase your father's hard work and understanding of society. Describe your interactions with him and how he has mentored you. Adding more specific examples and anecdotes will significantly enhance the response. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

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