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Band 5+: Describe a person you know who has chosen a career in the medical field. For example, doctor or nurse. You should say who he she is, what he she does, why he she chose this career and explain how you feel about him or her

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Well, today I'm going to talk about a person that I know who has chosen a career in the medical field. It is none other than my sister Rashma. She's 15 years old right now. She's the best in the University of London. From a young age, she was very passionate about science and helping others. After completing her high school, she wanted to study science, so she chose that path. After completing her high secondary education, she moved to Bombay, which is in the northern part of India, and she was practicing.

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Well, today I’m gonna talk about a person that I know who has chosen career in medical field. It is none other than my sister Rashma. She’s 15 years old right now. She’s the, uh, best ne in the University of London. From her young age, she was very passionate about science and helping each other. After completing her high schools, she wanted to do some studies on science, so she had chosen science. After this, completing her high secondary, she moved to, uh, Bombay. It is in the northern side of India, and she was practicing.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

about: 2

she's: 2

science: 2

after: 2

completing: 2

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Pronunciation

6.5

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The response is a good start but lacks detail and coherence. It mentions the sister's passion for science and helping others, but doesn't fully explain how this led to her medical career choice. The description of her current activities is unclear and incomplete. Elaborating on her specific role, daily tasks, and the impact of her work would significantly improve the response. Connecting the sister's actions to the speaker's feelings would also strengthen the answer.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is understandable but lacks fluency. There are some hesitations and fillers ('uh'). The structure is a bit disorganized. Work on smoother transitions between ideas and reduce the use of fillers. Practice speaking at a consistent pace.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is adequate but not particularly sophisticated. The phrase 'best ne' is unclear and needs correction. Try to incorporate more precise and varied vocabulary to describe Rashma's passion and career path. For example, instead of 'practicing,' specify what she is practicing (e.g., medicine, surgery, etc.).

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors. 'She's 15 years old right now' is unusual for someone in university. 'Helping each other' should be 'helping others.' 'She had chosen science' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'she chose science' or 'she chose to study science'. 'Bombay is in the northern side of India' is geographically inaccurate. Focus on improving grammatical accuracy and sentence structure.

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