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Band 5+: Describe a person you know who has chosen a career in the medical field (e.g. a doctor, a nurse) - Who he/she is - What he/she does - Why he/she chose this career - And explain how you feel about him/her has chosen a career

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The nursing field is very common in my country nowadays. One of my best friends, Meira, chose a career in the medical field as a nurse. She's been a childhood friend of mine and she knows a lot about nursing jobs, how to treat patients, and why. She's fascinated by the career and always researches it, even sharing details with her parents. I'm really proud of her for choosing a career that helps others and makes a difference in people's lives. It's inspiring to see her passion for nursing and her dedication to her patients.

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The nursing medical field is very common in my country nowadays. One of my best friend called Meira is chosen as a professian, uh, as career in the medical field, as a. As a nurs. And she is a childhood friend of mine and she knows very well about the uh, nursing jobs and uh, how to treat a patient and why? Because she is fasinated with that career opportunity and that she is every time survey is serving the details to her parents and um.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Vocabulary Repetition:

nursing: 3

career: 3

field: 2

she's: 2

patients: 2

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Pronunciation

5.5

Your pronunciation is average. It is understandable but not always accurate. Focusing on the rhythm and stress patterns of English could prove beneficial.

Task Response

4.5

The student provides a good description of their friend and her career choice. However, the answer lacks depth and specific details. For example, the student could have mentioned what kind of nursing Meira does or what specific qualities make her a good nurse. The student could also have elaborated on how Meira's career choice inspires them. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

4.5

The student's speech is somewhat hesitant and disjointed, with several pauses and repetitions. The answer lacks a clear structure and could benefit from more cohesive devices to connect ideas.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The student uses a range of vocabulary, but some words are not used accurately or appropriately. For example, 'fasinated' should be 'fascinated' and 'survey' should be 'research'. The student could also use more specific vocabulary related to nursing.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

The student makes several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses and articles. For example, 'chosen as a professian' should be 'chose a profession' and 'she knows very well about the uh, nursing jobs' should be 'she knows a lot about nursing jobs'. The student could also benefit from using more complex sentence structures.

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Band 5+: Describe a person you know who has chosen a career in the medical field (e.g. a doctor, a nurse) - Who he/she is - What he/she does - Why he/she chose this career - And explain how you feel about him/her has chosen a career

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