Band 5+: Describe a piece of good advice that you once ignored but later realized was correct. You should say: - Who gave you the advice - What the advice was - Why you ignored it at the time And explain why you eventually realized it was good advice.

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

The response addresses the topic but lacks development and clarity. It mentions who gave the advice and what it was, but the reason for initially ignoring it is vague ('I thought it was unpredictable'), and the explanation of why you later changed your mind is not clearly articulated. The answer would benefit from more specific details, such as describing the challenges you faced, the exact moment you decided to follow the advice, and the positive outcomes that resulted. Additionally, the narrative jumps abruptly, and the mention of the friend's death is not connected to the main point. To improve, structure your answer to cover all four bullet points in a logical sequence, and provide concrete examples or personal experiences to make the story more compelling and complete.

The answer has a basic structure but lacks coherence in places. The speaker jumps from the advice to ignoring it, then to the friend's death, without clearly explaining why they later changed their mind. There is noticeable hesitation ('uh', 'um') and repetition ('really good', 'very good'). To improve, organize the response with clear signposting (e.g., 'Initially, I ignored it because...', 'However, later I realized...') and avoid unnecessary repetition.

The vocabulary is limited and sometimes imprecise. For example, 'sport support' is unclear, 'B lessons' is vague, and 'I don't have a profit' is an odd choice. The speaker uses basic words like 'good', 'fat', and 'advice' repeatedly. To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary (e.g., 'overweight', 'fitness routine', 'beneficial', 'valuable') and avoid vague terms. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

There are several grammatical errors and limited range. Examples: 'I have outweighed' (should be 'I was overweight'), 'I didn't started' (should be 'I didn't start'), 'I don't have a profit' (should be 'I didn't see any benefit'), and 'he died' is abrupt and unclear. The speaker uses mostly simple sentences and struggles with past tense consistency. To improve, practice using a variety of structures (e.g., conditional sentences, relative clauses) and ensure subject-verb agreement and tense accuracy.