Band 5+: Describe a piece of technology (other than a smartphone) that you find difficult to live without. You should say: - What it is - How often you use it - What you use it for And explain why it is so important to you.

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response addresses the main points of the topic: it identifies the computer as the technology, mentions its uses (homework, study, entertainment), gives an approximate duration of ownership, and briefly explains why it is essential (reduces time, makes tasks easier). However, the answer lacks specific details and personal experience, which limits its development. To improve, you could provide concrete examples of tasks you perform on the computer, describe a particular scenario where it was crucial, and elaborate on the impact it has on your daily routine. Expanding the explanation with more depth and clarity will make the response more comprehensive and engaging. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The answer is organized but lacks clear progression and detailed development. There is noticeable repetition (e.g., 'because it is very helpful', 'I use it my computer to develop it') and some hesitation/self-correction ('I have it about 3 years ago or 5, I don't remember very well'). To improve, use a clearer structure with signposting (e.g., first, then, finally), avoid unnecessary repetition, and elaborate on specific uses and the reasons why it is essential.

Vocabulary is adequate but limited in range and precision. There are errors in word choice ('home words' instead of 'homework', 'evaluations' instead of 'assessments', 'make my effort Have fun' is confusing). To achieve a higher score, use more varied and precise vocabulary (e.g., 'indispensable', 'rely on', 'accomplish tasks efficiently', 'streamline my workflow') and avoid repeating basic terms like 'helpful' and 'essential'.

The answer shows some grammatical range but with several errors. Examples of errors: 'I have it about 3 years ago' (should be 'I have had it for about 3 years'), 'I can't use or develop by myself so I use it my computer to develop it' (incorrect structure and redundancy). There is also inconsistent use of tenses. To improve, focus on using present perfect correctly for duration, avoid subject-verb agreement issues, and ensure clauses are correctly connected.