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Band 4+: Describe a place in your country or part of your country that you would like to recommend to visitors/travelers You should say: - What it is - Where it is - What people can do there - And explain why you would like to recommend it to visitors/travellers

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Alright, in Indonesia, because I live in Indonesia, I recommend some places that tourists from any other country must go. First, you must go to one of the most beautiful national parks in Indonesia, called Bromo Tengger Semeru in East Java. You can see a beautiful volcanic landscape and also play with the sand. I really like this place because I went there maybe two years ago and it was a very beautiful memory and experience. I met other people, had good weather, and had a good experience.

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Alright, in Indonesia, because I live in Indonesia, I recommend some places must go for tourists who come from any other country. For the first, you must go to one of the most beautiful national park in Chiapah. called Promo Tengger Semeru in West Java. You can see a beautiful landscape of volcanic and also you can play with the sand and also like that. I very like this because I ever I went I ever I have I ever go to the this site this place maybe two years ago and it’s very beautiful memory and experience I meet other people I have a good weather and also have a good experience

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

indonesia: 3

beautiful: 3

because: 2

other: 2

experience: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The answer addresses the topic by describing a specific place (Bromo Tengger Semeru) and mentions what people can see and do there. It includes personal experience and explains why the speaker likes it. However, the response lacks detail on why it is recommended to tourists, and the structure could be more developed. To improve, provide more specific details about activities, cultural significance, or unique features, and clearly explain the reasons for recommendation. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer has some coherence but lacks clear organization. There is noticeable repetition and self-correction (e.g., 'I ever I went I ever I have I ever go'). Use clearer signposting and avoid hesitations. Practice structuring your answer with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is basic and repetitive (e.g., 'beautiful', 'good'). There is an error in place name ('Chiapah' instead of 'Indonesia', 'Promo' instead of 'Bromo'). Expand your vocabulary with more descriptive and precise terms. Use synonyms and topic-specific words.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Several grammatical errors: 'I very like' (should be 'I really like'), 'I ever I went' (fragmented), 'have a good weather' (uncountable noun). Sentence structures are simple and often incorrect. Work on subject-verb agreement, tense consistency, and using a variety of sentence structures.

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