Band 7: Describe a place where you visted and there was lot of pollution (User-Submitted IELTS Speaking Answer)

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Well, due to the influence of both large scale and small scale industries, pollution is increasing day by day. Today, I would like to discuss a specific place that I visited and where I observed a significant amount of air pollution. I distinctly remember this visit back when I was in 10th grade, just after completing my board exams. My parents had planned a trip to Shiri, Emeri Sar Sahil, with the main intention of visiting the Shiri Golden Temple. This location is known for its historical significance. During my visit, I noticed several indicators of air pollution. Many people were suffering from various health issues related to air pollution, such as respiratory problems and asthma. I believe that a major contributor to this pollution is the presence of industries and factories in the area. Additionally, there was an international airport nearby, leading to a high volume of air traffic. I observed a significant number of people smoking in the vicinity as well. Furthermore, the heavy traffic in the area indicated a large number of cars and trucks, contributing further to the pollution levels. I strongly recommended that the government take action to address this pressing issue, as it poses a serious threat to society. In conclusion, this place I visited was heavily polluted, and steps need to be taken to mitigate this environmental challenge.

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Well, due to the encouragement of large scale and small scale industries pollution is rising day by day. Today here, I would like to talk about a particular place that where I had visited and noticed there was a lot of air pollution. I vividly remember that when I was in 10th standard, I had just completed my board exams, and my parents made a plan to visit Shiri, Emeri Sar Sahil, as we had made a plan to visit Shiri Golden Temple. As this was the place where people visit to know about the historical period, when I went there, I noticed a lot of things that was related to the air pollution. Most of the people were suffering from the air pollution as they had a lot of diseases such as respiratory system problem, and moreover, they suffer from the diseases such as asthma. In I think that most of the pollution was caused due to the encouragement of industries and factories which caused a lot of pollution Apart from this, there was an international airport from where boarding was taken. People went to the another nation with the help of planes because of place, there is large number of people who were smoking a lot. Moreover, there was larger number of traffic which shows that people have large number of cars and trucks which causes a huge amount of pollution. In order to combat this problem, I advised government to tackle this problem as this would be very harmful for the society. So all in all, this is the place where I visited and there was a lot of pollution.

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