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Band 4+: Describe a place you have visited that was very noisy. You should say: - Where it was - When you went there - What made it noisy And explain how you felt about the noise and the place.

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I will talk about a place which I visited and that place was very noisy. Actually, this place was a public transport. When I go to this park, there are a lot of people and they make this place very noisy. Last time when I went there with my friends, it was 2 months ago and I wanted to go to this park and to be aware about a new attraction which they built. Actually I go there often and I want to just relax and spend time on the attraction there with my friends. There are a lot of visitors there, so I think that these people make a lot of noise there. And I think that I felt like last time when I visited this place, I just didn't have my earphones, so I don't want to be in noisy places. So I get angry when I feel and when I listen to both of like noise, so I don't like to be in noisy places. So I don't want to go back there. And as a result I think that this place is a very noisy place which I visited.

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I will talk about a place which I visited and that place was very noisy. Actually, this place was a public transport. When I go to this park, there are a lot of people and they make this place very noisy. Last time when I friends there, it was 2 months ago and I want to go to this park and to be aware about how a new attraction which they built. Actually I go there often and I want to just relax and spend time on attraction there with my friends. There are a lot of visitors there, so I think that these people make a lot of noise there. And I think that I felt like last time when I visited this place, I just don’t know my earphones, so I don’t want to be in noisy places. So I get angry when I feel and when I listen both of like noise, so I don’t like to be in noisy places. So I don’t want to go back there. And as a result I think that this place is a very noisy place which I visited.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

there: 8

place: 7

this: 6

noisy: 5

when: 5

that: 4

which: 3

visited: 3

very: 3

time: 3

want: 3

think: 3

like: 3

don't: 3

about: 2

actually: 2

people: 2

friends: 2

attraction: 2

noise: 2

places: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The response addresses the topic but has some inconsistencies and lacks depth. The candidate mentions a public transport and a park, which creates confusion about the actual place. The answer covers where, when, and what made it noisy, but the explanation of feelings is brief and somewhat repetitive. To improve, ensure clarity and consistency in describing the place, provide more specific details about the experience, and elaborate on the emotional impact with more varied vocabulary and examples.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer lacks clear organization and coherence. The speaker jumps between ideas (public transport, park, attraction) without a logical flow, and there is significant repetition (e.g., 'noisy places' mentioned multiple times). The response does not fully address all parts of the topic, such as clearly explaining what made the place noisy or providing a structured conclusion. To improve, use a clear structure (introduction, main points, conclusion) and link ideas with cohesive devices like 'firstly', 'moreover', 'in addition'.

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is limited and repetitive, with basic words like 'noisy', 'place', 'people', and 'go' used frequently. There is some attempt at description (e.g., 'public transport', 'attraction'), but it lacks precision and variety. To improve, use a wider range of synonyms (e.g., 'crowded', 'chaotic', 'bustling') and more specific vocabulary related to noise (e.g., 'hubbub', 'clamor', 'roar'). Also, avoid vague phrases like 'both of like noise'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses (e.g., 'When I go to this park' should be 'When I went to this park'), missing articles (e.g., 'a public transport' should be 'public transport'), and awkward sentence structures (e.g., 'I get angry when I feel and when I listen both of like noise'). The range of structures is limited, with mostly simple sentences. To improve, practice using past tenses consistently, correct article usage, and vary sentence structures by using complex sentences with conjunctions.

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