Band 4+: Describe a place you would like to live in the future. You should say: - Where it is - What it is like - Why you want to live there And explain what you would do there.

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

The response introduces Tokyo as a desired place to live, mentioning its blend of traditional culture and futuristic technology. However, it primarily focuses on why the speaker wants to visit rather than live there, and the description remains quite general. To improve, elaborate more on the specific aspects of Tokyo that appeal to you as a place to live, and provide more details about what you would do there. Address all parts of the prompt more directly. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

The response starts well but becomes disjointed towards the end. There are noticeable pauses and a lack of smooth flow. To improve, practice speaking continuously on a topic for two minutes, focusing on connecting your ideas logically. Use cohesive devices (e.g., 'furthermore,' 'however,' 'therefore') to link sentences and paragraphs.

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and varied. The phrase 'in a way no others have said to us' is awkward. Try to use more specific and descriptive words related to the topic of places and future living. For example, instead of 'busy,' you could use 'bustling' or 'vibrant.'

There are grammatical errors that affect clarity, such as the incomplete sentence 'One side you have already been busy. you'. Focus on using correct sentence structures and verb tenses. Practice speaking about familiar topics to build confidence and accuracy.