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Band 5+: Describe a small business you admire. You should say: - What the business is - Where it is located - What it sells or offers And explain why you admire this business.

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The reason that I really admire The Cocoon is that it focuses on hair care and skin care. It started in 2020 and has grown significantly in just a few years. Many Vietnamese people appreciate it because it offers organic products and personalized services. They have built a development team to expand their offerings. In the market, this brand stands out by promoting itself like other brands. The owner of the brand stated that they just want to provide the best products to users, not for profit. I think that is the aspect I admire the most about them.

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The reason that I really admire the cocoon is that it makes friends and it really makes about hair care and skin care later, more than later. It starts from 2020 until now. It’s just a few years, but many Vietnamese people are really very honest because it’s It’s an organic product and a private service that we can build. that can build a developer team and develop a lot more for them. And also in the mall world, this brand downloaded to promoting like other brands. It’s just it. And the owner of the brand said that they just want to give the best product to the user not for the profit, I think that I am the most, the most, I like the most thing I like best, broader.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

that: 4

admire: 2

products: 2

brand: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is below average and may be understood with some effort. Pay attention to common phonemes that are challenging for you.

Task Response

The response addresses the topic but could benefit from more specific details and elaboration. Providing more information about the business's location, what makes it successful, and a more detailed explanation of why you admire it would strengthen the answer. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is somewhat coherent but contains noticeable hesitations and repetitions ('more than later,' 'It's just it,' 'the most, the most'). The organization of ideas is present but could be smoother. To improve, try to minimize pauses and repetitions by practicing speaking more fluidly on familiar topics. Use linking words to connect ideas more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks precision and variety. There are some inaccuracies in word choice ('makes friends,' 'downloaded to promoting'). To enhance lexical resource, focus on learning synonyms and using more precise vocabulary related to business and personal values. Pay attention to correct word usage in context.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammatical range is limited, and there are several errors in sentence structure and verb tense ('it makes friends,' 'this brand downloaded to promoting'). Accuracy needs improvement. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures and focus on correcting common errors in verb tense, subject-verb agreement, and sentence construction.

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Band 5+: Describe a small business you admire. You should say: - What the business is - Where it is located - What it sells or offers And explain why you admire this business.

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