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Band 6+: Describe a successful sports person you admire?

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Now I would like to describe a successful sports person that I admire. Recently, topics about football have become common in our country because a few months ago, one of the renowned sports clubs visited our country and played against a football club from Kazakhstan, which was definitely a hard topic to discuss. After this situation, I started to learn more about sports people, especially football players. One I would like to mention is Desmond Hood Pife. He is one of the youngest football players in that football club, and despite his young age, he is very resilient and demonstrates great dedication to his work. I can definitely say that because of his determination, his club became winners last week.

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Now I would like to describe a successful sports person that I admire. Recently, topics about football are becoming a common thing in our country because almost months ago one of the renowned sports clubs visited our country and played against a football club of Kazakhstan which definitely was the hardest topic to discuss and after After this situation, I started to know more about sport person, especially football players. One I would like to mention, his name is Desmond Hood Pife. He is one of the youngest football players in that football club. and despite his young age he is being really resilient and demonstrating good dedication to his work and I can definitely say that because of his determination his clop became became like winners last week

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

football: 5

sports: 3

that: 3

club: 3

would: 2

about: 2

country: 2

because: 2

definitely: 2

players: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The response is somewhat relevant to the topic, but it lacks depth and specific details about the sportsperson's achievements and qualities. The introduction is a bit lengthy and could be more focused on the topic. To improve, provide more concrete examples of the sportsperson's success and explain why you admire them.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is generally coherent, but there are some hesitations and self-corrections that affect the flow. The introduction is a bit tangential, and the connection to the specific sportsperson could be smoother. To improve, focus on maintaining a consistent pace and avoiding unnecessary digressions. Practice structuring your response with a clear introduction, main points, and conclusion.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more precise and varied. Words like 'resilient' and 'dedication' are good, but the overall range is limited. To enhance your lexical resource, try to incorporate more specific vocabulary related to sports and personal qualities. Use a thesaurus to find synonyms and expand your word choices.

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There are several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('became became') and awkward phrasing ('hardest topic to discuss'). While the overall meaning is clear, these errors detract from the accuracy. Focus on practicing verb tenses and sentence structure. Review basic grammar rules and try to identify and correct your common mistakes.

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