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Band 6+: Describe a time when you felt proud of a member of your family. You should say: - Who the family member is - What they did - When this happened And explain why you felt proud of them.

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I am really proud of my mom because she is a very strong woman. She can take care of me and my brother. I love her because she takes care of me when I'm sick and when I was young, when I couldn't take care of myself. She takes care of me all the time and works hard to earn money so I can go to school. She wants me to take a special course, and she treats me very nicely. I admire her because I think she is a role model for me. If in the future I have a child, I will take care of my child just like she takes care of me.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

I am really proud and appreciate my mom too much because she is a very very strong girl. Like, she can take care of me and my brother. I really love her because she likes to take care of me when I’m sick, when I’m young, when I can’t take care of myself. She takes care of me all the time and she works hard to make money, to make me go to study in the school and she wants me to do a special course and she treats me like really, very nice and why I fell in love with her is because of I think she is a low model for me. If in the future I have a kid, I will take care of my kid same her.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Vocabulary Repetition:

care: 6

take: 4

because: 3

takes: 3

when: 3

child: 2

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Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is above average. However, you may find complexity in certain words challenging. Regular practice should aid in improvement.

Task Response

The response addresses the topic but could benefit from more specific details and a clearer narrative structure. While the speaker expresses pride in their mother, the reasons provided are somewhat general. To improve, focus on describing a particular event or achievement of the family member and elaborating on the specific circumstances and the speaker's feelings at that time. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The response is generally understandable, but there are some hesitations and repetitions ('very very,' 'like'). The structure follows the prompt, but could be more clearly organized with better transitions between points. Try to minimize filler words and pauses.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is simple and repetitive ('take care'). While the meaning is clear, using a wider range of vocabulary would improve the response. For example, instead of always saying 'take care,' you could use words like 'nurture,' 'support,' or 'provide for.' Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are some grammatical errors, such as 'why I fell in love with her is because of I think she is a low model for me' and inconsistencies in tense ('when I'm young' vs. 'when I couldn't take care of myself'). Focus on using correct sentence structures and verb tenses. Also, 'low model' should be 'role model'.

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