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Band 5+: Describe a time when you share something with others - what you shared? - who you shared with? - why you shared it? - and explain how you felt about sharing it?

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I have shared a lot. I want to talk now about a time I shared my computer with my friend. When I was a student, my teacher assigned a presentation. My friend didn't have a computer and couldn't complete it. So, I lent him my computer. We worked on the presentation together and submitted it. He realized he needed a computer and asked his father to buy one. Later, he invited me over, and we used the computer together. From then on, we always shared it with each other.

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I have shared a lot. I want to talk now. I shared it with my friend. That is the computer when I was a student. My teacher gave a presentation to make. My friend didn’t have a computer and he couldn’t do it. Then I gave my computer to him. Then both of us made a presentation together. Then we was submitted. Then he realized he needed a computer and told his father to buy a new one. Then he invited me over and we used the computer together and from then on we always shared it with each other.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Vocabulary Repetition:

computer: 5

shared: 3

friend: 2

presentation: 2

together: 2

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Pronunciation

7.5

Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

The response is relevant to the prompt and provides some details about the experience. However, to improve, consider elaborating on your feelings about sharing your computer and providing more specific details about the presentation and your friend's reaction. Adding more descriptive language will enhance the response. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

5.5

The answer is understandable, but the narrative jumps around a bit. Adding a few more transitional words and phrases would improve the flow. For example, instead of 'Then we was submitted,' try 'Then we submitted it.' The structure could be improved by focusing on a clear beginning, middle, and end.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks sophistication. More precise and varied vocabulary would enhance the response. Instead of repeatedly using 'then,' try using synonyms like 'afterwards,' 'subsequently,' or 'following this.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

There are several grammatical errors, such as 'Then we was submitted' and inconsistent tense usage. Focusing on subject-verb agreement and consistent tense will significantly improve grammatical accuracy. Consider reviewing basic grammar rules.

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