Part 2

Band 4+: Describe a time you helped someone learn something new. You should say: - Who you helped - What they were trying to learn - How you assisted them And explain how you felt about the experience.

See all user-submitted answers on this topic

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Note: Both the topic and the answer were submitted by one of our users.

49% Accuracy The overall pronunciation accuracy of your speech, reflecting how well a native speaker can comprehend it.

Polished transcript:

Male Female

I would say this person is my sister because she thinks she's hard to understand in art. She works very hard, but she was so afraid of it. She can't start to truly embrace this type of work because a lot of people believe that she can't do it. I see the potential in her. She tries to find a new style, but she struggles. She's holding back because she's a girl, and girls often feel pressured not to be too ambitious. However, she is actually quite talented. She just needs to try and believe in herself. I'm sure that she will be excited about what she can achieve if she pushes herself to pursue her passion.

Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

I would say this person is my sister because she also thinks she’s hard to understand by art. She works very hard, she was so afraid about it. She can’t start to truly mean this type of work because a lot of people believe that I’m not sure if it’s a male or a female fox man, but I see the story that she can do it. She tries to find a new one, but she can’t do it. She’s holding the pond because she’s a girl and the girl doesn’t try to be actually simple but where she is she’s doing an actually simple because she never gets up to try and to become an actual person and I’m sure that you’ll be excited for what’s happening.

Tips: Click on each word to see feedback.

Speaking Time: 47 seconds

Check Your Own Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample With Your Idea?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

4.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Vocabulary Repetition:

because: 3

she's: 3

can't: 2

believe: 2

herself: 2

Try using synonyms for the above words

Pronunciation

Your pronunciation is below average and may be understood with some effort. Pay attention to common phonemes that are challenging for you.

Task Response

The response touches on the topic but lacks depth and specific details. To improve, provide more concrete examples of the methods used to help your sister and elaborate on your feelings about the experience. Adding more detail and structuring the response to directly address each point in the prompt would strengthen the answer. The response could be expanded as it currently feels quite brief.

Fluency & Coherence

The answer is difficult to follow due to a lack of clear organization and coherence. There are instances of repetition and unclear connections between ideas. To improve, focus on structuring your response with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion. Use cohesive devices (e.g., 'however,' 'therefore,' 'in addition') to link your ideas and ensure a logical flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and lacks precision. There are instances of vague language and imprecise word choices. To enhance your lexical resource, try to use a wider range of vocabulary related to the topic and focus on using more specific and descriptive words. Consider using synonyms and paraphrasing to avoid repetition. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The answer contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. To improve your grammatical range and accuracy, focus on practicing different sentence structures and reviewing basic grammar rules. Pay attention to verb tenses, articles, and prepositions. Consider using more complex sentence structures to demonstrate a wider range.

Answers On The Same Topic:

Describe a time you helped someone learn something new. You should say: – Who you helped – What they were trying to learn – How you assisted them And explain how you felt about the experience.

I would like to talk about a time when I helped one of my classmates as far as I remember it happened last year during our university semester. To be honest, she was struggling with a research assignment and was feeling very stressed. She didn’t understand how to analyze the data properly. So I decided […]

Band 8+

Describe a time you helped someone learn something new. You should say: – Who you helped – What they were trying to learn – How you assisted them And explain how you felt about the experience.

I would like to talk about the time I held my younger cousin learn how to use a computer for school work. At that time he was struggling with basic computer skills like typing using Microsoft Word and researching online. He needed these skills for his school projects but he didn’t know where to start. […]

Band 8+

See All

Describe a photo you took and proud of

I’m very proud of the picture of my cat. I took while I was on summer holidays at my grandparents house. It was a couple of years ago and it shows my cat lying on his back in a very cute way. I feel like it was such a lucky day to cut him in […]

Band 7+

See All

Band 4+: Describe a time you helped someone learn something new. You should say: - Who you helped - What they were trying to learn - How you assisted them And explain how you felt about the experience.

Check Your Own Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample With Your Idea?

Overall Band Score

Pronunciation

Task Response

Fluency & Coherence

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Describe a time you helped someone learn something new. You should say: – Who you helped – What they were trying to learn – How you assisted them And explain how you felt about the experience.

Describe a time you helped someone learn something new. You should say: – Who you helped – What they were trying to learn – How you assisted them And explain how you felt about the experience.

Describe a time you helped someone learn something new. You should say: – Who you helped – What they were trying to learn – How you assisted them And explain how you felt about the experience.

Describe a time you helped someone learn something new. You should say: – Who you helped – What they were trying to learn – How you assisted them And explain how you felt about the experience.

Other Topics:

Can you tell me about the animals you like, and why you like them? Can you tell me about a time when you watched some wild animals, and what happened? Do you think that animals are useful to people? Why? Why not?

Describe a time you changed your opinion about something. You should say: what the opinion was what made you change your mind how you felt about changing it and explain whether you think it's easy for people to change their opinions

Describe a piece of technology you used for the first time and found surprisingly difficult to operate. You should say: - What the technology was - When and where you used it - What made it difficult to use And explain how you eventually managed to use it successfully.

Describe a time when you had to adapt to a new routine. You should say: - What the new routine was - Why you had to change your routine - What was difficult about it And explain how you eventually adapted to it.

Describe a person you know who is very good at organizing things. You should say: - Who this person is - How you know them - What kind of things they organize And explain why you admire their organizational skills.

Describe a photo you took and proud of

Check Your Own Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample With Your Idea?

Overall Band Score

Pronunciation

Task Response

Fluency & Coherence

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium