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Band 7+: Describe an ad with a famous person in it.

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I would like to talk about an advertisement featuring my favorite actor, Shah Rukh Khan. He is one of the most famous actors in the Bollywood film industry. I have known him for around 13 years now. I first saw this advertisement on different social media platforms, such as Facebook, YouTube, and even Instagram. The advertisement is for a soft drink, and Shah Rukh Khan is promoting the product. In the advertisement, Shah Rukh Khan is drinking the juice and enjoying it with some of his close friends, and they are discussing how refreshing and relaxing it is. The most fascinating part about this advertisement that I find is its simplicity, and it is very short, not too long. As a result, it is not boring or irritating; rather, it is quite interesting and engaging as well. On top of that, there is some catchy background music, so it enhances the quality of the advertisement overall. I think the involvement of Shah Rukh Khan makes the advertisement stand out, and it helps to grasp people's attention as quickly as possible. I personally am fond of this advertisement because it is really fun, quite simple, and captivating, although I don't buy the product myself, but I really enjoyed this advertisement. It helps me to relax, and it is really eye-catching. I really love it, especially when it is featuring my favorite actor. Why not?
Actual audio transcript (What native speakers are likely to hear):

I would like to talk about an advertisement featuring my favorite actor, Shahrukh Khan. He is one of the most famous actors in Bollywood film industries. I have known him for around 13 years now. I first gave my cross-biz advertisement on different social media platforms, such as Facebook and YouTube, even on Instagram. The advertisement is for a soft drink and Shah Rukh Khan is promoting the product. In the advertisement Shah Rukh Khan is drinking the juice and enjoying it with some of his close friends and they are discussing about how refreshing and relaxing it is. The most fascinating part about this advertisement that I find is that it’s simplicity and it is very short not too long as a result. It is not boring or irritating rather it is quite interesting and engaging as well. On top of that there is some catchy background music so it enhances the quality of the advertisement overall. I think involvement of Shahrukh Khan makes the advertisement stand out and it helps to grasp people’s attention as quick as possible. I personally am fond of this advertisement because it is really fun, quite simple and captivating, although I don’t buy the product myself more of them but I really enjoyed this event. It helps me to relax and it is really eye-catching. I really love it especially when it is featuring my favorite actor. Why not?

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Overall Band Score

7
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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:
advertisement: 9
shah: 4
rukh: 4
khan: 4
this: 4
really: 4
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Pronunciation

7
Your pronunciation is quite good. Working on consistency and tackling difficult sounds may enhance clarity.

Task Response

7
The response addresses the topic directly and provides a clear description of the advertisement, including the product, the celebrity, and the setting. It includes personal experience and specific details, such as the platforms where the ad was seen and the content of the ad. However, to achieve a higher score, the response could be more fully developed by elaborating on the reasons why the advertisement is effective, the impact of the celebrity's involvement, and perhaps comparing it to other advertisements. Additionally, the response could be more structured, with a clearer introduction and conclusion, and avoid minor grammatical issues such as 'I have known him for around 13 years now' (which may be confusing) and 'Why not?' at the end.

Fluency & Coherence

7
The answer is well-organized and coherent, with a clear structure: introduction, description, and personal opinion. The speaker uses cohesive devices like 'as a result' and 'on top of that' effectively. However, there are some minor issues with fluency, such as the phrase 'I first gave my cross-biz advertisement' which is unclear and likely a slip, and the ending 'Why not?' feels abrupt. To improve, ensure all ideas are clearly expressed and avoid vague or confusing phrases. Practice speaking smoothly without self-corrections.

Lexical Resource

7
The vocabulary is appropriate and mostly precise, with good use of descriptive words like 'refreshing', 'captivating', 'eye-catching', and 'engaging'. The speaker uses some idiomatic language naturally, such as 'stand out' and 'grasp people's attention'. However, there are a few inaccuracies: 'cross-biz' is not a standard term (likely meant 'came across'), and 'more of them' is awkward. To improve, expand vocabulary range and ensure word choice is accurate and natural. Avoid using informal or unclear expressions.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

7
The grammar is generally accurate, with a good mix of simple and complex structures. The speaker uses present continuous ('is drinking'), past simple ('first saw'), and conditional structures ('although I don't buy...'). There are a few errors: 'Bollywood film industries' should be 'Bollywood film industry', 'it's simplicity' should be 'its simplicity', and 'as quick as possible' should be 'as quickly as possible'. Also, the sentence 'although I don't buy the product myself more of them' is grammatically incorrect. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, possessive pronouns, and adverb forms. Practice using a wider range of grammatical structures accurately.

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